Tuesday, October 11, 2011

My most afraid time

First time to swim
  That is a hot summer day, that time I was 5 years old. I went to my father’s hometown, there have a beautiful river. My father decided to teach me how to swim, so we went to the river I look at the beautiful water, and very afraid of it.
  I watched another person swim in the cool water like a fish, I wish I can swim like them. I tried to go in to the river. But I can’t make me stop afraid of it; the water is very cold, I am afraid I may folly down to the river, because I never swim before. So I ran bake to the land and cried very loud. I feel afraid very much. I felled cold, and I looked poor. Then father come and help me.
  Now, I can swim and swim very well. But I can’t forget that time, I first time to swim.           

2 comments:

  1. Hi Joy,

    I really like your descriptions. It is easy to picture what you are talking about. I bet it was scary learning how to swim in a river. I learned how to swim in a heated pool. It wasn't so bad. Thank you for sharing this memory with us.

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  2. Hi Joy! I really liked your essay

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