Poetry writing
I like to write poetry. I fell a stream of spring is flowing in side my body when I am writing a poetry. I enjoy it. Write poses can help me thinking. However, this is my first time to lean write poetry white English. I lean three kinds of poetry, Diamante, Haiku, and cinquain. They are interesting. I lean how to use syllables to write poetry. I also found that the poetry writing in English and Chinese are similar. They all have rhyme, stanza, and couplet. I’d like to write some my own poetry in my free times. I hope I can learn and write more about poetry.
Birds
Red, blue, white and green.
They are the flowers in the sky.
Singing is their language.
They are sliver bell in the tree.
Greed the sunshine every morning,
Listen.
They are sinning beside my window.
“Come-on, come-on
Let’s fly”
I wish I am one of them,
Joy,
ReplyDeleteYou are a natural at poetry writing. I can feel your close connection to nature when I read your poem about birds. It is a beautiful poem. I like your descriptions of the birds' colors and their singing voices. I can visualize them up in a tree singing to you while you watch them from your window.
I am glad that you enjoyed the poetry unit. It was wonderful to listen to all of the poems written by you and your classmates. I really had fun teaching with Mrs. Andrews too. She's great!
Joy, I read your poetry-birds. You did a really good job.In this poetry I know you like birds. I also know you learn a lot in this part. I hope you can do more poetry like this.
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